Pride & Perception

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Blurb:

What if…

- The entail on Longbourn had been broken?
- The Bennets owned Netherfield Park?
- Jane Bennet had firm opinions?
- Lizzy overheard the second derogatory comment Darcy made about her beauty? After the Bennets had dined at Netherfield Park, he said, “Her a beauty? I should as soon call her mother a wit.”

Chapter One

“Mr. Bennet, I heard Netherfield Park has been let at last.”

“Yes, my dear, to a young man from the North. He came and looked it over a few weeks ago.”

“Oh, thank goodness. I hate having your great uncle’s old estate being left vacant, and the last tenant was terrible. Is he a single young man?”

“I do not have all the details other than his father recently passed and even if he were single, I caution you about your conduct. No young man wants a wife whose mother has nervous flutters and vapors.”

“Oh, Mr. Bennet, you never had compassion for my poor nerves.”

“You mistake me, my dear. I have a high respect for them. In fact, they are old friends, what with them being mentioned with consideration these twenty years at least.”

“I know you are teasing. I have been quite steady these last ten years.”

Mr. Bennet rose from his chair and approached his wife, leaning down to give her a gentle kiss on the forehead. “Yes, my sweet Fanny, you have settled quite nicely since we inherited Netherfield Park and you no longer worry about the hedgerows.”

He settled back behind his desk and Mrs. Bennet picked up her sewing, but not too many minutes passed before she left her work laying idle on her lap, gazing out the window.

“What are you thinking, my love?”

“Lizzy plans to visit the tenants of Netherfield Park and then meet with Mrs. Nicholls for their bi-weekly meeting about staff and how the new footman is faring with his duties.”

Mr. Bennet chuckled. “Is she doing this for us, or for Hill’s son?”

Mrs. Bennet smiled back. “A bit of both. This is Jeremy’s first real job, other than doing footman duties for us when we have guests. Hill is proud as punch that he grew into such a tall, fine looking young man. He’ll do well, however, Lizzy did say she’d give a poke about the manor and walk him through the finer points of dinner parties and the such.”

“Aye, she’ll make sure he does a good job. I have told her the lease has been accepted, so she’s also making sure the rest of the staff is up to speed and all things are ready for our new tenants.”

“Good.” Mrs. Bennet re-assumed her sewing. “Lizzy is quite adept and Mrs. Nicholls is an excellent housekeeper. When Hill recommended her sister to the job five years ago, I was glad we were able to place her there. She is a godsend.”

“When Lizzy inherits, she’ll have the luxury of competent staff and good tenants.”

“I assume, as before, no mention will be made that we own Netherfield?”

“None whatsoever. I’ll not have some young man chase our daughter for her inheritance. No, we will remain the Bennets of Longbourn, with an estate that is entailed–”

“Mr. Bennet! Have you still not told anyone the entail was broken after Lydia was born?”

A wry grin spread across Mr. Bennet’s face.

“No, I also do not want Jane chased for her inheritance. I want our daughters to marry for the same reasons we did, and that means the gentleman who wins their hand in marriage will do so because they love them, unconditionally.”

“Should I be a tad flighty, to test the limits?”

“My love, a little goes a long way, so be careful when and where you spout nonsense. You do not wish to chase the bird out of the bush before the gun is primed and ready.”

“When I meet the young man, I shall assess just how silly I have to behave. Do not worry, Mr. Bennet. I have our girl’s best interests at heart.”

“I know you do.”

“I would assume my brother Philips is taking care of the contract for – Oh!  I never asked you his name.”

“Bingley. Mr. Charles Bingley.”

“Is he a stable young man? I ask because I do not want our tenants to fall under the management of someone who would be irresponsible. You know how gentlemen can be when they have unlimited funds and behave in a capricious manner.”

“Not to worry, my dear. Not only will Philips keep an eye on him, Lizzy watches over her tenants with a zeal that would rival a dragon guarding its treasure.”

Mrs. Bennet laughed softly.

“That she does. With luck he’ll be a sensible and amiable young man and take a liking to one of our girls, or is he still in mourning?”

“I believe they came out of mourning a few months ago. He’s never owned land or cared for tenants. It was his father’s greatest wish to buy an estate and become a gentleman, which is why he decided to lease Netherfield. There is no better place to learn. Morris is a good steward and will guide him with a firm and steady hand.”

Mrs. Bennet gazed out the window, a soft smile on her face.

“Would it not be lovely if he met our Jane and fell in love. She cannot be so beautiful for nothing, you know.”

“I do not know about that. He might take one look at the mother and decide to run me off.”

Mrs. Bennet laughed outright. “You are such a rogue, Thomas Bennet! As if any young man would look twice at a woman whose been married for over twenty years and bore five daughters.”

“I do not jest, Fanny. You are still a beautiful woman and if he has any sense in his head, he’d pursue you with great ardor.”

With that, he rose from behind his desk, a dangerous glint in his eye. Mrs. Bennet dropped her sewing and shifted in the chair, her lips parting with anticipation.

“Thomas,” she warned in a soft voice, “our daughters are down the hall in the parlor.”

“Then,” he said as he locked the door and turned to face her, “we shall have to be very, very quiet.”

***

All of Meryton was in an uproar over the pending arrival of the gentleman to Netherfield, especially when it became known that Mr. Charles Bingley, a man with over four thousand a year, planned on attending the quarterly Assembly with a large party. The shops in the small village soon ran out of ribbons, lace, dancing slippers, and fans. The local modiste and her assistants were run off their feet sewing orders for new gowns.

The ladies of Longbourn were equally excited, but not frantic in their preparations. Their papa had visited Mr. Bingley when he arrived and the young gentleman had returned the honor a few days later. The ladies, unaware of the visit until a few minutes after he left, caught sight of him as he cantered down the graveled drive just before he turned the corner and disappeared from view.

The sum total of their experience was that he wore a blue jacket and rode a very large horse.

Finally, the night of the quarterly Assembly was upon them and the Bennet family was surrounded by friends and neighbors, enjoying moments of great hilarity and somber reflection as news of an unexpected death of one of their neighbors became known. A woman, well into her sixth decade, had become a permanent fixture in the clutch of women who tittered behind fans during these types of events. Her caustic wit would be sorely missed, especially by Elizabeth Bennet. In previous Assemblies, she’d willingly sat out some dances in order to visit with the lady. More than once, during the night, her gaze flew to the chair the citizens of Meryton left empty in honor of their dearly departed friend.

“Are you and your sisters anxious to meet Mr. Bingley and his party, Eliza?”

Miss Charlotte Lucas, one of Elizabeth’s dearest friends, had come alongside and handed her a welcomed glass of punch.

“Not anxious, per se. More curious, I think.” She took a sip of her punch. “You have met the gentleman, what is your opinion?”

“He’s amiable and quite young. Well, younger than me, although, these days, most gentlemen of marriageable age are.”

Elizabeth looped her arm through Charlotte’s and gave it a squeeze.

“You are too hard on yourself. My aunt Gardiner was about your age when she met and married my uncle, and look how happy they are.”

“Eliza, next to such beauties as you and your ethereal sister, Jane, no woman stands a chance of capturing the eye of any eligible gentleman.”

“I give you leave to sing the praises of my eldest sister but must stop you when you elevate me into the same sphere as Jane. I am, to my mother’s never-ending horror, a hoydenish rapscallion who cavorts about the fields of Longbourn.”

Charlotte laughed out loud and was about to respond when the doors to the Assembly opened wide. All eyes turned and watched an elegant group of people enter the room.

“Which of the painted peacocks is our Mr. Bingley?” Lizzy whispered to Charlotte.

“The one in the blue jacket is he. Next to him is his youngest sister, then his eldest sister and her husband.”

“And the man with the quizzical look upon his brow?”

“That would be Mr. Darcy.”

“Poor man, he does not look pleased to be here.”

“Poor he is not, dearest. His estate in Derbyshire is rumored to be worth about ten thousand a year.”

“Well then, poor Mr. Bingley.”

“Whatever do you mean? It is well known he is worth about five thousand a year.”

“When the matrons of Meryton discover Mr. Darcy is worth twice his friend, it will be as if he never existed.” Lizzy bumped her shoulder against Charlotte’s and waggled her eyebrows. “There is hope for you and me yet, Charlotte. Out of sheer desperation, Mr. Bingley may have to pay court to us mere mortals while Jane basks in the attention of Mr. Darcy.”

“Your mother is right! You are a rapscallion.”

With that, Elizabeth moved to join her mother in order to be introduced to the illustrious tenants of Netherfield Park.

As it turned out, Jane’s head was not turned by Mr. Darcy. Instead, her attentions were captured by the delightful Mr. Bingley. Upon introduction, he successfully petitioned her hand for the next two sets. When asked if he liked dancing, Mr. Darcy flatly stated, ‘No,’ and left their party. Shocked at his abrupt rudeness, Mama gaped after him. Something she had not done in years. She caught her husband’s eye and waved him over.

“What is it, my dear?”

“When you visited Mr. Bingley, did he seem addled in the head?” she said in a low voice so it would not carry.

Mr. Bennet took a step back and assessed his wife. “I do not understand what you are asking me.”

“When a young man of good manners, as well as good fortune, befriends another man, who is abominably rude to a newly introduced person, does that not also speak to his character?”

“You are speaking of Mr. Darcy.”

“One and the same.”

“Mrs. Bennet, I caution you against making the same mistake as Mr. Darcy. You do not know his character and what he is thinking. His manners might be lacking, but do not take the low road with this, my love. You are better than that.”

Mrs. Bennet huffed and Lizzy choked back a snicker. It was not often that her mother’s feathers were ruffled.

“Fine,” she finally acceded, “but I take leave to not like him.”

Papa kissed Mama’s cheek, disregarding the raised eyebrows at his open affection.

“I give you leave to not like him.”

“Would you check on Lydia and Kitty? They’ve been a trifle too excited this evening and I am pretty sure Lydia is flirting with that Westcott boy. I do not think we should have allowed them to come this evening.”

“We agreed, Fanny, the local Assembly was the perfect venue for our two youngest daughters to make their soft come-out. We are among friends here and they cannot get into too much trouble where they are so well known.”

Mama tapped her fan into the palm of her hand. “Yes, but I did not think the Netherfield party would be so disobliging and they will get the wrong impression of our family.”

“Were you not planning on being a bit flighty yourself, to test the waters?”

Lizzy watched as her mother cast an assessing look toward the dour Mr. Darcy, who’d begun to pace the edges of the hall.

“Very well,” she finally huffed out on a sigh. “Let Lydia have her light flirtation, but we still must take care that her reputation is not stained beyond any hope of redemption. If we are judged by our country manners, then so be it. They are not worth our attention.”

“I am sure, between her sisters and myself, Lydia will not come to any harm.” He squeezed his wife’s hand with great affection. “In case I forgot to tell you – you look absolutely lovely tonight, Mrs. Bennet.”

“Oh, you!”

She flushed and brought up her fan to cool her heated cheeks. Lizzy grinned and moved away, catching sight of the empty chair. With a sigh, she lowered herself onto the lightly padded seat and, while watching the dancers, remembered her friend with fondness. Her silent reverie was interrupted with the advent of Mr. Bingley accosting Mr. Darcy not more than four feet from where she sat.

“Come, Darcy,” said he, “I must have you dance. I hate to see you stand about in this stupid manner.”

“I most certainly will not. You know how I detest the activity, especially if I am not acquainted with my partner. At an assembly such as this’ – he snorted in derision – ‘it would be insupportable. There are no women in this room whom it would not be a punishment for me to stand up with.”

“Fie, Darcy!” cried Bingley. “I would never be as fastidious as you. Why, there are several here who are uncommonly pretty.”

“You are dancing with the only handsome girl in the room.”

Lizzy took note that he looked in the direction of Jane and she smiled. At least Mr. Darcy showed some good taste.

“Oh! She is the most beautiful creature I ever beheld.” Mr. Bingley glanced over Mr. Darcy’s shoulder and seeing Elizabeth, whispered loudly, “One of her sisters, sitting down behind you, is very pretty and I dare say agreeable. Would you let me introduce you?”

“Whom do you mean?” Darcy turned around and looked for a moment at Elizabeth, till catching her eye, he withdrew his own and said in a voice that would have frozen over the Thames, “She is tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt me. I am in no humor at present to give consequence to young ladies who are slighted by other men.” At Bingley’s horrified gasp, he continued. “You had better return to your simpering partner and enjoy her smiles, for you are wasting your time with me.”

Stunned, Lizzy took small comfort in the apologetic look Mr. Bingley afforded her before removing himself to seek the company of Jane. Mr. Darcy gave her one more haughty look before stalking off to join his own party, who’d not strayed far from the door, as though they expected to take flight at any moment.

Lizzy remained in place, not wishing the rude Mr. Darcy to think his words had pierced her outward confidence and toyed with the idea of sharing his caustic comments with friends. It was only when she remembered the words Papa had spoken to her mother earlier, of taking the high road when it came to the gentleman from Derbyshire, that she pasted a smile on her face and joined her parents, ne’er a caustic word crossing her lips. She’d no sooner greeted her Mama that she was asked to dance and was never in want of a willing partner for the rest of the evening.

She also never realized the eyes of one taciturn gentleman followed her all night. Even when he danced with the ladies of his party.